Short is a butterfly’s life to love
Yet it sings a joyful song
Though we sing in sweet harmony
Our love has lasted too long
Some love is just short and sweet.
Nice one! I agree with the above comment, there is a question that hangs in the air…
Yeah, sometimes we hang on too long and just go through the motions. lol
And go through the emotions too.
Hello! And thanks for visiting my blog.
Oh thanks for commenting.
I had just posted a page called PLEASE and was reading a comment of http://libertyofthinking.wordpress.com/ about love and butterflies etc etc. Then I saw your poetry challenge and it just rather came together. lol
I don’t have much to say and definitely couldn’t write much more than 4 lines.
In fact all my blog entries are only one word. See, you made me use two words for a title. lol
I may try some more of the opposites……for fun.
Now that’s what I call a proper reply! You excelled your “one word”! Miracles are still happening!
Have a grea day!
But did you notice I put the REPLY in the wrong place. lol
Should have been to ruleofstupid.
No, no, you’ve put I right, I just noticed it there and nosed in😜
This is nice – hard to do the ‘theme’ element of the prompt in so short a poem – but there’s a sense of mystery in a love lasting too long that I like.
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